Friday, 25 August 2017

Quick write

Yesterday we did a 10 minute quick write and write a story with these words in it:

  • Chicken
  • hobbled
  • towbar 
  • death
We also had to highlight the best sentence. Here's mine:



On Saturday when the day hit noon I wandered down to the local dairy to get an ice cream  and some hot chips with chicken salt. I made my way back down my street and sat down on the steps in the sun watch the the carriages and people go by while I ate my food.

After a while a man who hobbled by and saw me eating my food and tried to take it, he ripped the paper and all the hot chips fell on the ground, I punch him in the nose and he ran off and screaming like a little girl.Then a prison carriage carrying a man on a chair with wheels by it’s towbar came down the street and stopped because it was loose then a dog came and sat under the horse, I don’t know why but it stayed there until the prison guards shooed him off and keeps going. I was curious to see where the were going so I followed. They finally stopped in a forest beside a concrete room and went inside and I looked through a little window and watched the people inside, they were talking to a guy in the chair all strapped up, then it hit me: the guy in the chair was being sentenced to death. Then I ran off in fear telling myself that I shouldn’t of follow the carriage.